2011年5月25日 星期三
Expressing an Opinion - 2 ( Meeting people through online dating sites. )
We can view online dating as a negative point. First of all, in chat rooms, on dating websites and on discussion forums, people meet strangers naturally just like in the offline world and fall in love with each other easily. It is very dangerous to meet the person through online dating sites because he or she may not be as perfect as you know. It is easy for people to be what they want to be through the Internet. In addition, some researches show that online dating attracts criminals. In the real life, we are used to protecting ourselves from being robbed or cheated, but the Internet has provided criminals with new victims who are unprotected because of their unfamiliarity with new technology. Criminals look for lonely people to date with them on the Net. In general, people forget their common sense and give out their credit card information or even send money to them because of the unfamiliarity and friendship. Meeting with the criminals may lead to terrible consequences. It is for all these reasons and more that I believe meeting people through online dating sites is dangerous.
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開頭句有點突然欸@@
回覆刪除as perfect as you know>>as perfect as you think
attracts criminals這個動詞好奇怪xd吸引犯罪嘛..
最後一句的more that不知道是什麼意思@@~
跟我寫完全相反的ㄟ 真有趣XD
Criminals look for lonely people ...他要怎麼知道他是孤獨的阿~XDDD
回覆刪除倒數第二行 It is for all these reasons and more that ....???more是??
這篇也寫得不錯耶
有很強力的原因
回覆刪除很有次序 !!
這篇很棒喔>__o
回覆刪除文章很緊實~
Criminals look for lonely people to date with (them) on the Net.
回覆刪除them是不是省略比較好啊?
我也是持和你相反的意見~
但是看完妳的文章後就有點被妳說服的感覺XD
說理明確~十分堅持自己的論點!!!
這篇很棒很棒=)))
We can view online dating as a negative point.
回覆刪除第一句好像太快切入主題了
哈~和我支持的一樣~很棒唷~
We can view online dating as a negative point.開頭跟上一篇一樣喔~如果可以再加一句話的話可以讓讀者不會一下子就看到你的很強烈的論點=))
回覆刪除我覺得其他的寫的還不錯喔~
文章有充實度喔~^0^
in the offline world 在離線世界? 代表??
回覆刪除匯錢那裏感覺比較像是被詐騙時會有的事欸!