2011年5月18日 星期三

Comparing - 3

  I have two dogs and they are alike in several ways. Ella's weight is the same as Judy. Besides, Ella's color of fur is similar to Judy as well. The main similarity is that both of them are friendly. Ella loves people, and so does Judy. In addition, both of them are smart and can do a lot of tricks. For example , Ella can stand on the ball. Similarly, Judy can stand on the ball. The most interesting thing is that they are both picky eaters. They only eat the most expensive dog food. Because of them, my life is full of joy and laugh every day. I really love them and can't live without them.

9 則留言:

  1. 整篇文章很流暢喔~
    沒有甚麼大錯誤喔~
    我覺得寫的不錯=))

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  2. I have two dogs and they are alike in several ways.
    這句前後可以多加一些形容~
    像是我有一隻狗...
    牠生了兩隻小狗~~
    牠們是雙胞胎所以有很多相像的=)
    例如像這樣的故事!!!
    讓開頭不要太突然><

    比較用法用得很好!!!
    句子也十分通暢~~~
    形容動物也十分生動=)
    這篇很不錯喔~~~

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  3. 還蠻順暢的耶~~
    只是both這個字出現好多次了...
    可以換成其他的句型 語句看起來才不會一直重複XDD

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  4. I have two dogs and they are alike in several ways.
    我覺得這句可以先提出名字,這樣後面突然出現名字才不會太突兀
    I have two dogs, Ella and Judy, and they are alike in several ways.

    both of them 或they both很相似
    可以換別的字來代替才不會重複太多

    不過還蠻順的!!

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  5. 相似的內容可以在舉更多的例子
    文章有點短喔

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  6. 雖然有點短但是唸起來很順耶~
    清新自然:d
    文章好可愛喔
    讀完有很想養狗狗的感覺XD

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  7. 提到狗狗之前可以先介紹他們 不然剛開始看會以為是人呢:))
    整個篇幅有些短不過還挺順的欸:D

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  8. The main similarity is that both of them are friendly. 後面可以再加adorable or lovely
    我覺得寫的很可愛的感覺~不錯喔^口^

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  9. 文章寫很順順暢很不錯喔
    文章很可愛
    讀完後會有讓人想養狗的衝動喔XDXD

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