2011年10月18日 星期二

Future Perspectives

     Being one of the greatest technical and vocational education institutions, National Taiwan University of Science and Technology is my ideal university I have been longing for. I will still choose English as my major in college and I think I need further training in all aspects of English skills, especially my oral speaking and listening skills; the Department of Foreign Language of yours offers exactly the courses I need. Although I’m still not sure about my future career, I will equip myself with professional English skills during the four years in college and explore where my interest is and what I can do in the future.

4 則留言:

  1. 不錯唷~
    可以加上如果能有機會進入貴校,我會....
    所以希望你能給我這個機會
    感覺會更誠懇 希望可以被錄取

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  2. education institutions
    稱學校為教育機構有點怪~~
    感覺教育機構事像再說類似舉辦全民英檢的公司~~
    可以在查查看其他用法=)))

    內容有點短~
    其他可以再加一些想修的課程等...
    讓文章更有說服力=)))

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  3. ya 我覺得挺好的阿:D 希望你錄取喽:)

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  4. nice essay!
    讓人感覺你是一個上進的學生XDD

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