2011年6月1日 星期三

Comparing - 3 ﹝revised﹞

  I have two dogs, Ella and Judy, and they are alike in several ways. Ella's weight is the same as Judy. Besides, Ella's color of fur is similar to Judy as well. The main similarity is that both of them are friendly. Ella loves people, and so does Judy. In addition, both of them are smart and can do a lot of tricks. For example , Ella can stand on the ball. Similarly, Judy can stand on the ball. The most interesting thing is that they are both picky eaters. They only eat the most expensive dog food. Because of them, my life is full of joy and laugh every day. I really love them and can't live without them.
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  1. 金龍2011年6月15日 晚上11:42

    1.Ella's weight is the same as Judy.
    -->Ella's weight is the same as Judy's.

    2.Besides, Ella's color of fur is similar to Judy as well.
    -->Besides, Ella's color of fur is similar to Judy's as well.

    3. Because of them, my life is full of joy and laugh every day.
    -->Because of them, my life is full of joy and laughter every day.

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