Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman are both my best friends. It is a coincidence that they were born on the same date. Besides, they are alike in several ways. Stephanie Brooks is 160 centimeters tall. Likewise, Ann Friedman is 160 centimeters tall. They also have the same brown eye color. In addition, Stephanie Brooks’ hair color is black and so is Ann Friedman. Finally, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman come from Alabama State
Stephanie Brooks is 160 centimeters tall.
回覆刪除tall-->height
恩~~其他ok 不錯唷~~
Likewise, Ann Friedman is 160 centimeters tall.
回覆刪除盡量不要重複出現同樣的句子喔
可以想看看用別的方法表達他們一樣高^_^
同上tell 改成 height
回覆刪除其他沒有太大的問題
結尾很有趣 :)
很特別的故事~
回覆刪除感覺很新穎!!!
不過最後一句可以改成sisters或twins~
So, I would not be surprised if I know they are sisters or twins. It is interesting, isn’t it?
感覺會跟長的像更有關聯=)
is 160 centimeters tall.
回覆刪除只有talll要改height喔
編得很棒呢
念起來很順!
So, I would not be surprised if I know they live in the same community or even they are neighbors. It is interesting, isn’t it?
回覆刪除=>最後的結尾不錯~有種俏皮的感覺
整體來說寫得很通順喔~~~
Stephanie Brooks’ hair //Stephanie Brooks's hair
回覆刪除還是要加"s"吧! 他是名字不是複數XDD
160 centimeters tall//160 centimeters height
其實我不太懂為什麼要寫這個欸? 沒什麼關係的感覺
So, I would not be surprised if I know they live in the same community or even they are neighbors. It is interesting, isn’t it?
故事的構思挺新鮮呢!
tall→height
回覆刪除感覺敘述的人很興奮，結論也很讚!!
中間也很通順!