2011年4月20日 星期三

Why Is English Important?

  Nowadays, more and more parents want to send their children to study English. Moreover, many universities and companies even take the ability of English as one of the most important entrance requirements. Why is English so important for us? There are some reasons below. To begin with, English is an international language. If people travel abroad and have to communicate with foreigners, it would be great to speak to them by English. Secondly, many researches and essays are written in English. We can get more knowledge if we can read in English. Finally, people who can speak more than one language gain more confident and have some advantages. For instance, it is easier for them to find a job than those who can speak only Chinese. Since learning English has so many benefits, all of us should catch every opportunity to learn it.

8 則留言:

  1. 倒數第四行的"自信"要用名詞喔

    For instance, it is easier for them to find a job than those who can speak only Chinese

    這裡會讓我覺得是硬掰出來的xD
    因為這跟第二點好像很雷同喔@@

    opportunity 搭配的動詞是 seise/grab哦
    不是像中文字面上真的去"抓住"機會 其實是"把握"的意思

    整篇文章都還算通順
    有進步喔加油-//-

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  2. Finally, people who can speak more than one language gain more confident and have some advantages.
    -Finally, people who can speak more than one
    language gain more confidence and have more advantages.
    自信要用名詞 你是要說有更多的優點吧?!
    接下來才舉例


    all of us should catch every opportunity to learn it.
    你還說我好笑
    你自己用catch = =+

    opportunity 用 grab

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  3. reason給的有點少耶... 不過文章還滿通順的啦 如果理由再多給一點會更有說服力XDD

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  4. 我覺得很棒耶
    沒什麼錯誤大致上看起來也很通順
    不過可以再多列幾點
    Why is English so important for us?
    這句出現時會讓人想思考一下!!

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  5. take the ability of English as one of the most important entrance requirements
    雖然說用take也可以~不過regard~as可能比較好喔
    speak only Chinese應該是speak Chinese only~
    大致上都很順唷>__O

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  6. Nowadays, more and more parents want to send their children to study English.
    後面可以家原因 為什麼

    找工作那一點阿 我覺得可以再加一句 ex:多一份能力阿...

    整體看起來很棒唷:D

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  7. 我覺得寫的很棒喔~
    每個列點都還滿詳細的~
    我覺得整體來說是依篇還滿順暢的文章喔~
    Why is English so important for us?=>我還滿喜歡這一句的~
    很寫實的問題^^

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  8. For instance, it is easier for them to find a job than those who can speak only Chinese.
    可以改成
    For instance, there are more advantage for us to find a job like diplomats or translators which need good English ability.
    我這句可能寫的不是很好...
    換句話說就是可以在工作上有更多選擇=)
    這樣就不會跟上面的舉例重複了!!!

    列點很詳細喔=D

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